Time
I see it as our foe
Going on with us in toe
Not seen, heard or smelt
Only felt
Can’t be hurt, burnt or broken
A life never woken
I feel the pressure of time
Walking past so I get in line
Taking away the things that are mine
I’m a kid, I want to play
And that’s what I do most of the day
But I have a life, somewhere
Just got to find it before time’s first there.
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