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Where Are You
Where are you?
Why haven't you been talking to me?
Are you afraid of what we might do?
I sure want to be close to you.
What could I do?
Love you till the end of the earth
Or marry you and stay forever?
What are you afraid of?
Where are you?
What are you doing?
I want to know
What's going on?
Are you scared of me
Do I frighten you?
Tell me the problem
And I'll try to fix it.
Am I too wierd
Should I watch what I say?
Am I going crazy
Or is it just me today?
Are you pushing me away
Should I figure out the message?
I don't know how
But I'll try to decode the message
I'll try to figure out
What you're trying to say
Please give me a sign
Of what you want me to do
Where are you
What are you doing
What should I do
Where are you and where am I???
Thise poem was written more freely I think and I'm not a big fan of the whole free verse thing. Some of the lines sound sort of awkward when you read them aloud, which is really the best way to judge how your own writing sounds. But again, you've done a good job of conveying your own feelings at the time that you wrote it.