Black and white
Two colors each of a different plight
White-pure, plain, simple, blinding
Black-complicated, tainted, dark, foreboding
Are you black and I white
Or you white and I black?
Does it matter who's right
Or who's better?
Am I pure as the snow
And you as tainted with soot as the crow?
Or am I black and tainted with sorrow
And you pure with hope for tomorrow?
Lend me your strength, your hand
Give me your heart
I'll give you my hand
If we're ever apart,
To be apart from you, I'll be damned!
I wish you were here
To hold me and tell me to sleep
I wish you were near
I wouldn't make a peep
Then without a word:
I'd tell you my troubles
And what lies in my heart
I'd tell you my faults and my fumbles
Then I'd do my part
I'd listen to you heartbeat
As you tell me of your day
I'd comment on your heartbeat
As you get swept away
I'd call you back to me
And we'd lie as silent as mice
Then you would see
The love I have to give
I guess
Just maybe
We're not in such a mess
Now it's plain to see
We aren't as different
As we seem.
Very Nice! Well written! Again this sort of regular rhyme scheme is the sort that usually appeals to me most. You also used wonderful analogies, metaphores, and imagery! Again, you have captures the spirit of someone who is trying to find/ define themselves! Definately one of my favourites!