dark world

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life

its a dark world and cruel world

there is so much evil

so much hate

every where you turn

someone is doing bad

why is this

no matter how hard we try

we can't get rid of the evil

its just a dark and cruel world

Author's Notes/Comments: 

this one is sad but a true poem if you dont agree with my view of the world let me know

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its really a good and impressive poem perfectly done with good idea.. hope you go through my poems too and comment..I am basically known as a peace wisher poet with 6 books published and dream for peace still... love good friends who sing the song of love and peace... let me sahre one of my own says....(( a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with..afzal shauq )) hope you be with me to make the ailing world medicate with love feelings ...in poem form