Yeah I'm just tryin to make it right
But I'm cuttin it close both day and night
Tryin to work hard the best I can
Get myself together get a little bit ahead
But when the blood comes outta my hands
What I done starts to get to my head
It's hard to make a good livin
When you're just barely alive
But I can say for sure
That what I have is all mine
Just tryin to make it right
Cuttin it close both day and by night
Livin out dreams of bein on top
But my head is hurtin and it won't stop
Echoes of yesterday are still in my head
Tonight I'll play it out through my hands
Just takin one day at a time
Always just tryin to get on through
Each day is spent tryin to get by
Tryin to figure out what I'm gonna do
There's no time I can spare
But I seem to do a lot of that
But it's not like we really care
So I'll just keep walkin my own way
I'm still tryin to make it right
And cuttin it close both day and night
Used to play outside in the pourin rain
Walkin in worn out shoes day in and day out
Sometimes I long for those days once again
But I can't go back if I want to be up top
Many friends I've left down the line
You went your way and I stayed behind
Many miles gave me time to think
This dream I have I think I'm gonna keep
Still try to make things right
Cuttin it close both day and night
I'll keep tryin just to make it right
Cuttin it close both day and by night
I thought your work sounded like lyrics.......then I saw in your bio that you're a musician. Nice work about the struggle to follow your dreams. It's rough, I know.....but sooooo much better than doing something with your life that you're just not made to do. Well written.
Dawn
This song talks about how hard this person worked, trying to make a living. And the undertones of this song (or poem) reflect the pain, and hardship this person expirenced. Good job, I look forward to more!