5 minute freewrite until school ends

i would give you the world you imagine in your heart

and free you from the cage you see with your eyes

but i can't

 

i would come to lay myself at your feet

and ask you to marry me in the city where my mother died

but i won't

 

i would make you a quilt and a center

i would make you a hot air balloon to god

i would show you how incompromising my love was for you

how forever

how sure

but it is impossible

 

i was processing the end

and i was loving you, with my entire soul

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    Some marvellous

 

 

Some marvellous demonstrations of love in your poem. I enjoyed your free write before school ended.


 

 

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