i would give you the world you imagine in your heart
and free you from the cage you see with your eyes
but i can't
i would come to lay myself at your feet
and ask you to marry me in the city where my mother died
but i won't
i would make you a quilt and a center
i would make you a hot air balloon to god
i would show you how incompromising my love was for you
how forever
how sure
but it is impossible
i was processing the end
and i was loving you, with my entire soul
Some marvellous
Some marvellous demonstrations of love in your poem. I enjoyed your free write before school ended.
http://www.postpoems.org/authours/a.griffiths57