thank you2

i remember you

i still love you

as if it was one of those middle days

not the beginning, not the end

one of those forgotten days in a random picture

where i am laying part of my body on yours 

without any regard as to how you feel

because in my comfort

is yours

 

we were together once

we were one 

the remembering is only soft,

it does not scrape, it does not hurt

very much

 

i hope you are safe

i hope you are loved

i hope you are cared for

and held and i hope

the side of your chin is cupped sometimes

by someone who deserves to touch you

 

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

someone told me they were glad i returned today and it made me excited to write again :)

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Very promising indeed! If you

Very promising indeed! If you tidy this up with a bit of grammar and punctuation you will have a real winner on your hands.

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thanks for commenting! i

thanks for commenting! i don't like to use punctuation in my poetry. what grammar mistakes can you see?