i remember you
i still love you
as if it was one of those middle days
not the beginning, not the end
one of those forgotten days in a random picture
where i am laying part of my body on yours
without any regard as to how you feel
because in my comfort
is yours
we were together once
we were one
the remembering is only soft,
it does not scrape, it does not hurt
very much
i hope you are safe
i hope you are loved
i hope you are cared for
and held and i hope
the side of your chin is cupped sometimes
by someone who deserves to touch you
Very promising indeed! If you
Very promising indeed! If you tidy this up with a bit of grammar and punctuation you will have a real winner on your hands.
thanks for commenting! i
thanks for commenting! i don't like to use punctuation in my poetry. what grammar mistakes can you see?