By: J.P. Salinas a.k.a Poeticscribble
Thursday, September 05, 2002
As she turned away, her eyes closing shut,
and my soul in pain longing to touch,
her soft and sweet crimson lips.
I could bare it no longer, I could no more resist.
My mind was losing it’s reality grip.
She moved with such grace, and with unselfish pace.
I drowned with her beauty when I looked at her face.
And I realized she could not be from this human race.
So angelic, so cosmic, this feeling she gave me.
I was suffering not to touch her, in deep agony.
My body completely, shivered so deeply.
For a moment she turned and parted her lips
She whispered so soft, like a sweet silent kiss
Her words floated with wings you could not see
So soft and delicate like milk & honey.
Her words were melodic like a nightingale’s song
My knees were so weak, I tried to hold on.
My senses were lost, all in a maze
As my passion grew more, I became more her slave.
Her words spoke of love, and filled me complete
I ran towards her, and fell at her feet,
I stood finally to gaze in her eyes
Breathless I whispered, “Embrace me forever”
She pressed her lips to me and said, “forever and ever.”
A great poem. I was writing about love myself in "Confusion?". You used very creative words and it presented great imagery and passion. A true great poem.