"Ocean" a "You" poem

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You twist, You turn
You take me to places no mans gone before
You slam, You caress
You are the hand that rocks man to sleep
You hurt, You soothe
May your love be as great as your fury.

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JP.

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ocean

This poem hit home for me, I grow up on the ocean and I know its beauty but also its power. we have lost many men to the ocean living on a small remote fishing island. but as you say, it put me to sleep every night, and as a kid i played on it. swim in it for years.

Great poem.

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Oh thank you very much. Sorry

Oh thank you very much. Sorry I couldn't respond sooner. School just started so now I am finally able to come back and update somethings. Yah I grew up on Huntington Beach s of course most of my literature influences include that of the ocean. Thanks again for your input.