she is pure perfection
she needs no correction
she is, in every way, pure
every move she makes is sure
her dress is a pearly, pure white
so white it has its own light
eternaly roaming Between Earth
finding people who are good despite their girth
her life is always good and true
even of that makes her blue
she guides people to be like her
to be holy workers, adorned with gold and myr
she longs for her very own bad boy
the juicy steak in her diet of soy
the adrenaline rush from riding his motor bike
is somthing she has come to like
it beats her holy, horse drawn charriot
to be a rebel like a Yankee patriot
alas her Father hates his
and she must accept this as is
but she strays from her duty
to go with him to a movie
to bad movies here are all history
but to be with him, to her, is not a mystery
Besides the horrible grammer
Besides the horrible grammer mistakes I like this :D ps guardian
omg could you help witth my
omg could you help witth my mistakes i feel foolish! but thank you for the R&R read and responce.
Mines terrible too I wish it
Mines terrible too I wish it was overrated but alas it is a useful tool, but if that grammar changes your meaning, it's a terrible war for how if we don't know grammar see what others saw? Lol I thought this was beautiful as is. :)
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
thank you for sticking up for
thank you for sticking up for my poem, i just want for people to understand, if grammer mistakes get in the way i want to eliminate them. but you are totally right.
I love this poem alot, its
I love this poem alot, its very descriptive and it shows alot of emotions and truth. I know i feel this way
-Elfy*
i think we all are looking
i think we all are looking for our gardian angle, its face is that of loves. the one you love is that angle, the one you are going to spend the rest of your life with, the one who knows you most. me and my hopless romaticism. lol new word anywho thanks for the R&R
Ur right we all are. Some
Ur right we all are. Some search forever! But some do find them.
-Elfy*