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I think so
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emotions Dose the sun set for you?
I think so
Does the moon shine for you?
I think so
Do bird chirp for your beauty?
I think so
Do I wake to see your smile?
I think so
Do I love because of you?
I think so
Does my heart skip a beat when you smile?
I know so
Does a chill go down my spine whenever I look at you?
I know so
Do my primal instinct salmost take over when you move a single lock of hair away from your eyes?
I know so
Do I lose hours of sleep hoping there is a way between us?
I know so
Do i belive rumors that say you are a heart breaker?
I don't think so
Is there a way for us tobe together?
I don't think so
Is your love worth all this agony of watching you love another?
I don't think so
Do you think of me more than that guy John?
I don't think so
Do you love because of me?
I don't think so
I like your idea here and its
I like your idea here and its a good, sweet simple poem, have you considered revisiting it and developing it further? I think you have something with potential here that you might want to delve a little deeper into and see if even more grows.
Thank you
First off thank you for the r and r, read and reasponce. second i read over my poem and relized you were right it was like a flower bud, that now is in bloom. thank you, you have helped me grow as a poet, there is no number that can describe the level of gratitude i have because of that.