Meredith

Within the course of her life

She has lost what she had

Gave up on some friends

Gained some habits so bad



Wanted to live

Without paying the toll

Have a great life

Without losing control



She once lost it all

Then got it back

Sometimes she falls

Gets on the wrong track



She is just like you

She is just like me

I guess you all have to fail

In order to see



Try to help those you love

Even if love you cannot stand

Be good to your enemies

As you are good to your friends



Kill not your thoughts

They will serve you well

Have a great life

But don't make it hell



Keep growing up

It is what matters the most

Know what you want

But don't ever boast



Try the best that you can

Just try to succeed

Beware of the man

He may end up like me...

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Meredith asked me to write her one, so I did.  This is what I came up with, probably not what she had in mind, but I think it is good advice, so even if she doesn't like it, I hope you do.

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crazy... didn't think you'd actually write one for me. really good though, lot's of stuff i can relate to.
THANKS!