PROFILE POEM

You know that feeling?

The one when you love soo much that you want to die?

I do...it feels so good, yet so bad.  Maybe if you looked into my eyes, you would feel the same...

Maybe we could be together...hand in hand.  Our hearts pounding together in unity.  Thats the way it could be, thats the way it should be.  But no!  That isn't how it is, friendship has made you oblivious to our surroundings...

All you see is people, and all I see is you...please tell me what I must do!  I know that fate binds destany together with threads, but what if I could change destany to make you mine?  What would you do?  Come with me and see!

If only it all was the way you wanted it to be, then no one would live in misoury... I'd be with you, U'd be with me, we would walk hand in hand so happily!  But thats in my dreams, not in yours, and I hope it could all be more

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This, I am guessing, was in a profile I had for MSN a long time ago.  Writtin in 2001.

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Hey, I read a lot of your poems and they are so incredibly amazing. If you had a book of your poems and songs I'd buy it. You're girlfriends were really lucky to have such a sweet boyfriend, i wish more guys were more like you :) Your songs made me try to sing them, but i such at making tunes. Anyways, this is my first comment to somebody, so i hope it did it right, even though i dont think there is a "way" to comment to someone.