I know you tried to do it
I really really fell for you
So I brought a star for you
Without thinking I gave it to you
For you, to help light up your life
and that you most certainly did...
I did accomplish something
To make you smile and happy
Somehow, you left me in the dark
But I remained by your side
Only for awhile were you satisfied
Until, when the star became dim
So you told me to fix it
I said I could not
You laughed of course
breaking the light source
So I brought the star for you
Without thinking, gave it to you
But you, yes you
mistreated me
disrespected me
then, ignored me.
and left me there,
on the ground, alone
in the dark
for no one to see.
A beautifully written poem.
A beautifully written poem. You express yourself very well.