'09 Third-Degree*

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Third-Degree*

I can see you through the fire in my heart
Burning ferociously as we both fell apart
It began with a warm spark later to embark
Hidden in the happiness lurked a "remark"
Ending what we never had from the start
Oh how the fire burns as it leaves its mark
Fiercly engraving a time or date it took part

©David Joel Rodriguez

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One hell of a remark

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Love it. You were able to express so much in just one stanza.