So many places to begin
on your smooth chocolate skin
a lick to the left then the right
savoring all that is ripe
slowly entering your halls
rubbing every inch of your walls
a center nibble on the top
sure does hit your spot
which causes you to pop.
I love how the ends of each line seem to bounce off of each other like a pin ball. It's similar to my poem called "Going Down" Check it out:
http://www.postpoems.com/cgi-bin/displaypoem.cgi?pid=81853
Spice Nice
Hot topics, thanks for the warning - I ignored it of course - Just love a good hot sack poem ~alelts~