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'04 Love and Hate
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2004 Soaring like the wind through a reeking field
Like the blood during an adrenaline rush
Creeping up on the Earth against it's shield
A sudden touch seduces the water to blush
...AND...
Creating a undesirable image outside the Iris
Composed of hatred and mindless thoughts
The visions' directing my eyes become a quiz
"My life" subsiding through an endless plot.
your choice of words here contrasts so perfectly the message i interpret when i read them. "a sudden touch seduces the water to blush"...there's something so soothing about that particular grouping. you make losing direction seem like a beautiful ritual instead of the mass of turmoil and doubt it usually is.
i expect great things for you. there is a world of promise and potential in your heart and mind, and i'm anxious to see where you can take it. keep up the brilliant work!