Kingdom come kingdom go
In colours red and blues
It's no use
To weep for the sons
Forced on knees
out of hues.
Reasons;
Make nonsense
Out of our lives
Tons of lame excuse!
'Again,' is the word
that repeats
its unsung monotone?
Cosmic rays wipe our tears
No more broken gramophones.
"Stop this low nasal tone of fake fears,"
Commands
The Power from the Universe
To submerge us into an eternal silence.
very good i like it i can feel your feelings. im note very good at reviewing but i really lov ethis one :)well see you oh yeha you have lots of poems i only have 11 O.O.
I like how you wrote this poem, the structure is very nice and it had a very nice rhythm. Keep up the good work :D