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Treasure Hunt
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Ribbons In my dream
Secured inside a submarine
exploring the unknown
Depth of the ocean
in motion serene.
The octopus in a dance
With its tentacles;
The flora fauna in a trance
With their miracles;
Shoals of rainbow colours prancing and straining.
To this symphony, like a queen bee our submarine
buzzing and whining
In competition with fishes to win over mermaids
playfully, we were searching for their fortress.
Divers delight under water, pristine
Away from earthy pandemonium
A world within.
This poem is in itself dreamlike the way you have written it. I felt like I was in the dream also.
Very good!
~Phil~