There once was a girl
Who didn't know the world
Got lost so easily
Until that one day
Suddenly her eyes opened
And her heart yelled out
It smacked her in the face
Just who she truly was
Then she showed the world
What she was capable of
And the world new her name
And the seas knew her doing
The wind heard her voice
She made an impact
She left a mark
She showed all of them
Just who she really was
a good poem with courageous words..expresion is satisfactory and idea is good too.. like this poem and its one of your good poems too.. well done