Television

They look straight at me for hours on end

But they do not really see me

I am lucky to be recognized once a month

Any other time I am left in the dust



They repetively push my buttons

Wearing me out; not caring

Being used excessively

Gets me super hot



The best part of my day…

Is when they all just go away

That is when I can finally rest

Let my face go blank; my mind go free

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August 8, 2008

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ThatCaptainguy's picture

You should try to use

You should try to use stronger words, it would make your writing have a more lasting impact. You could also look for topics that you have a stronger opinion about it may make it easier to write a stronger piece.