Do you want to hear a secret?
A secret that I have kept.
A secret that my heart told me,
That had made my eyes wept.
This secret that I am about to share
Should not be taken softly.
This secret is emotional,
But maybe that is just to me.
This secret can make a heart soar,
Or it can make a heart sore.
This secret can make one blush,
Maybe even make the blood rush.
Hmm, should I tell this secret?
Will I be judged if I tell?
My heart may break,
If this secret does not go well.
This secret is not only my own.
It is about another,
Who will will remain unknown.
However, he does not even know it yet.
Maybe, just maybe, I should
Let him in on this secret first.
That way no hard feelings,
And less chance my heart will burst.
So I conclude
This secret will remain
Intact within and not shared yet,
To harness any pain.
smart girl, sometimes it is best to keep secrets,
I think...if not revealed we can't get hurt...good job...
hmm so impressive poem is this one... the poetic flow is interesting and the theme is rich too... like your new subjects like you did here new composition of words... love it