All Gone



A child, playing hopscotch, sails thru the squares

on the blacktop.

Alone, red-faced, hair dampened from sweat as time evaporates like moisture in the air.



Sun setting on the flat dense horizon, he begins to wonder where his ride could be.

Clouds hover and all laughter sub-sides. He sighs.



Alone, he bends down to tie his worn shoe and hears the tires squeal.

He runs, panting to the sound and sails thru the squares across the blacktop.



Alone, white-faced, hair stiffened from sweat, he sees the taillights fade.

Now, the stars shinning too soon, he knows tonight will feel like eight hundred years, as he lies upon the blacktop.



Refusing the tear that wants to drop, he pretends to

have no fear.



So what if his dad forgot him.

So what if his dad forgets.

So what if he drinks the bottle of gin down again.

So what if he drowns his pain.



They lost her only a year ago, when the cancer came.



A child, playing hopscotch, loose gravel cutting into his knees, breathes the night air.

Tired, dark-faced, hair covered in dirt he looks up to see his father’s pickup drawing near.



No longer a child, hops into the front seat of his dad’s 67 Chevy. In silence they drive home.



While hopscotch innocence is lost again.






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running_with_rabbits's picture

I almost want to see a poem

I almost want to see a poem about the boy now

 

I really enjoy your writing, there is something about it that comes in very subtle and stirs just the right amount of emotion to make me think, feel and want more but not so much that i am over whelmed by it and shut down


Much Love

Ashley

nightlight1220's picture

Yes...in the blink of an eye

Yes...in the blink of an eye it can happen.... eloquently expressed. Loved it.

~peace~

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

Jason Radcliff's picture

great poem, very deep

kimbee's picture

sad poem but I love it.