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The girl who never cried.
She see's herself looking back,
She is always in a hurry.
In the mirror you can see evrything she lacks,
Her life is so blurry.
She starts to cry,
As she looks at the girl everybody else see's.
She can't stand to lie,
She is wishing everyone would believe.
She start's to pound on the wall,
When the memories flow back into her head.
She goes to the floor when she falls,
Getting dizzy from the words she said.
She see's the lights spinning,
As she reaches for the blade.
She knows she is not winning,
So she tries to take away the pain.
The blood forms a puddle,
It's just another one of those days.
She's in the floor looking for the huddle,
Just trying to change her ways.
Trying to get herself to speak,
As she realized she lied.
A tear ran down her cheek,
From the girl who never cried.
good poem
I wish I had been as good as you are when I was your age, decades ago. However, I would also make the suggestion to correct the verbs in your poem such that they do not have apostrophes. Only nouns take apostrophes of possession, and contractions take apostrophes of contraction; and the verbs are neither of those.
Starward