6:12 pm
The phone rang three times
before she answered and said, "Hey"
I asked how she was doing
and how was her day
She said, "Right now I'm doing good
but I know it's not going to remain
Something important came up
and I can't go out", she complained
-"But I thought we were having dinner together
I even got us reservations tonight"
"I'm really sorry about that baby
I promise I'll make it up alright
Listen, you can still have fun
Go to dinner with a friend
and don't worry about me sweetie
We can always go out next weekend."
She told me that she loved me
and she'd talk to me later that night
Then I began to think abotu it
Go out with a friend? I just might...
6:21pm
"Hello, this is Drew"..."Sup"
"What's up man? How's it going?"
"Good but listen, wanna grab a bite to eat
and see what movies are showing?"
"Sure man, not a problem
but first I gotta get a shower
How 'bout we got to Olive Garden?
I'll meet you there in an hour"
7:42pm
I look at my watch again
He's late as always, it's 7:42
I look up as he walks in
"You're late. I was gonna start without you"
"Sorry about that man
Traffic was so hard to beat
but anyway, who cares?
I'm starving now let's eat"
7:57pm
After we ordered, he asked,
"So, what'd you get for Kate's birthday?"
"Well Drew, it's a secret
but I will let you know I got it yesterday"
"C'mon man! It's me, don't worry
You can say and I won't tell"
"Okay, it's a diamond tennis braclet
and it was expensive as hell!"
"It's kinda hard to believe
THREE YEARS you've been with Kate"
"What can I possibly say?
She's my true soul mate."
8:39pm
We paid and then we left
because the movie was about to begin
Even though it'd be our second time
we were seeing "The Grudge" again
8:54pm
Drew and I got to the theatre
and made our way to the line
It was longer than we thought it'd be
but Drew obviously didn't mind
He was busy hitting on this girl
by trying to be cute and funny
I paid him no attention
as I began to pull out my money
but I couldn't help but to laugh
until something had caught my eye
Coming out of the theatre
Is that Kate with some other guy?!
The couple stopped outside the door
and I could tell they were holding hands
then I realized Kate never told me
what were her last minute plans
No way it could be her
Kate would never do something like this
I continued to stare at them
as the girl smiled and gave him a kiss
Instantly, my hairs were on end
and then my temperature doubled
I knew I had to calm down
If not, I'd be in serious trouble
but I couldn't help it
As much as I wanted to leave
I just stood there staring
finding it harder and harder to breathe
It felt like my heart was being choked
as beats exploded in my chest
I wanted to control my temper
I had to try my very best
What else could I do?
I wanted to KILL! I wanted to CRY!
I wanted to FIGHT! I wanted to DIE!
I wanted to RUN! I wanted to to TRY
to believe I was WRONG! Let this be a LIE!
But I knew it really was Kate
when we finally met EYE TO EYE!
- January 4 / 2005
Even though it's not a true story it was beautifully told. Fully displayed all emotions and had a rhythm that I could follow and even bounce to. Great job.