(Dedicated to Laura Ebersburger)
Just the sound of her voice
Make me smile and rejoice
A special way she makes me feel
To dream of her I think I will
For her, I will kill
For her, I will kneel
Is the too good to be real?
Perhaps this is the case
For I yet to see her face
But this is trivial and I couldn't care less
For she is the only one who makes me feel blessed
She won't leave my mind tonight
So unto her, this poem I write
To say I'll judge her looks, then I have lied
For I only judge on the inside
To me she is a princess
A hundred percent and none less
She touches my heart with gentle caress
Yes, I like her, I confess
And it's all because of her voice
And the way it makes me smile and rejoice
- January 22/ 2001
in the 7th line there is a typo. it should be "is this to good to be real" other than that it is a pretty good poem. You must know that not every peom has to rhyme. i think that if You did not worry so much about rhyming your poems would be extroardinary.