Why do you wait
Paitently
Without haste
Thinking it is you
It is not
Others just can't taste
The sweet nectar
Of your heart
Is enclosed within
You need not worry
Your time will come, will begin
You are a shy guy
Wanting love
Not on the fly
As most of us grasp
Without having to try
In search of more
You wait
Tis not you
But others who hate
Knowing you possess
This special gift
They take advantage
With their rubber hearts
Fingers crossed
You stay on standby
For true love
You're not lost
Just a shy guy
Knowing what love costs
03-20-01
Hey this one is really good. Good work *applaudes*
I know this is my second critique, but I feel as if things change and as with everything else so have I. I'm still that Shy Guy, but on the stars I no longer rely. Oh, I still wish and dream with a hopeful eye, upward looking toward that night sky. But on the ground solid I now stand, for love may be in the stars, but even a fool must land. Now don't get me wrong, even this Shy Guy will one day learn to fly. Thank you again for seeing in me what other's failed to notice...
Still a shy guy, secrets unfold, now I know why, a new man to behold, but still a shy guy, that I cannot deny. Have I ever said Thank You?.... Thank You!