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bone of my bone

flesh of my flesh

I have his rib

he has my heart

together we are

one

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This was just an outline of ideas for a poem... i wrote this, then looked at it and decided to keep it as the actual poem itself

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last updated 11 October 2010 - 7:01pm
©30 April 2004 - 2:58pm — LadyAryn
1 May 2004 - 5:41am — William A Rivers (not verified)
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Whoaness, that's good. You might want to keep that as an origonal, but take it, and extract the real poem, theres more there, I can feel it. Just the rythem and meter, theyre calling for more words...