his heart still part mortal
has fear of emotional pain
he's not the man you see
but his act is in vain
i can see he has a heart
he's not completely dead
afraid of getting hurt
too much he's already bled
doomed to be alone forever
and forever it will be
i'd gladly stand by him
but alas, he will not let me
he despises his fate
refuses to make it mine
he's trapped on the inside
by the ruler of their kind
my heart was torn away
and on the floor it slammed
his heart is caged by her
the queen of the damned
good rhyme, and meter. I dont know who akasha is, although ill assume it is the queen of the damned's lover?
You've really captured Akasha's state of mind. something even rice would enjoy.