I have nothing left,
I've lost it all
I need help.
Here my call-
I surrender.
How can I stop
This never-ending fall?
My life means nothing,
Nothing at all-
I surrender.
I take my life now,
And I give it to you.
Now that you have it,
What will you do?-
I surrendered.
Now I'm back,
Where I had begun.
But last time I broke,
And I had to run-
I surrendered.
I knew I was wrong,
To surrender so fast.
With this second chance,
I will make it last-
I won't surrender.
In the words of Tim Allen "Never give up, never surrender." A nice strong poem. Good work 8)
never surrender, never give up. And make it last until your time comes, and then give death a kick in the shins for good measure....