Surrender

I have nothing left,

I've lost it all

I need help.

Here my call-

     I surrender.

How can I stop

This never-ending fall?

My life means nothing,

Nothing at all-

     I surrender.

I take my life now,

And I give it to you.

Now that you have it,

What will you do?-

     I surrendered.

Now I'm back,

Where I had begun.

But last time I broke,

And I had to run-

     I surrendered.

I knew I was wrong,

To surrender so fast.

With this second chance,

I will make it last-

     I won't surrender.

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April Loebick's picture

In the words of Tim Allen "Never give up, never surrender." A nice strong poem. Good work 8)

William A Rivers's picture

never surrender, never give up. And make it last until your time comes, and then give death a kick in the shins for good measure....