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2. Guideless Entropy As to know what I am
shadowing in the middle of death
watching life drown
slowly so slowly
The emptiness surrounds everything
filling in the lies they made
the tears are dry
its almost over
Some being or misplacement now
corrupts the entire quaking balance
standing by
alone and helpless
Unusual familiarness enters
The circle is broken forever
shaking with fear
memories of futures
Screaming out for help once
Never to be heard again
unanswered riddle
a simple curse
Cannot be repeated alone
Deeper to the top of it all
no guide
lost again
Embraced by an old presence
Different and yet the same
ended journey
it never began
ok, so I was confused all throughout the poem, and I even read it like 6 times. its too vague. I could try and insert a meaning, but when I did, it would change the next line! can you explain it to me? Is there an explination at all? All in all it seemed to stay on the same topic, dismay and depression over a fate unwanted. But death, suicide fear and so many other emotions flood the whole poem....I think if you could find more distinct words or meanings in the same format it could be a really great poem.