Gone

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1. Blameless Ennui

Eyes that once glittered with hope

  Now seem dark and empty

The spirit that was so vibrantly alive

  Has been washed away from me

The life that once was strong

  Is now pathetically weak

My future that looked so bright

  Has become utterly bleak

Friends that used to be so kind

  Have each gone their seperate way

Loneliness gets worse and worse

  With each passing day

I feel alone in this big world

  As lost as a newborn fawn

How much longer will it take

  'Till I'm completely gone?

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Um, does anyone get the zombie?

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James Daniel Darr's picture

When we feel at our lonlyest moments we often think ourselves as zombies that jsut march on in life. You have captured this tought well dear.
darr

Jade Artist's picture

I really liked this one. It's really very good. I enjoyed reading it.

~~kitty~~

(kitty is my nickname)

- Mountaindreamer's picture

Makes perfect sense to me.. Um, you think that's a bad thing?