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Hamilton Revisited
As we lie here bleeding
Hamilton breathes a sigh.
A witness to passion,
The provider of dreams
Our timekeeper.
Rushing and pushing
10:45
He's awake.
Lazing and hiding
Beneath the sheets
She’s asleep.
A sheet tug of war
Man versus Woman
Hamilton the Judge
The right pair scattered
The fabric sewn, torn
Saturated mind and half closed eyes
Lingering desires of an unfinished tryst
Bidding Hamilton goodbye
tight piece
it was worth
the reason
jasline: did you post something on my crit page? i haven't got it. why don't you email me instead - at croissaint@excite.com? thx.