A Real Man. you said,
compels her to his will
(uh, that defines rape).
I would rather be a real
poet and worship my Love
(not in your terms, but
after Dante's example).
Kyakuchuu
Again, I have extended the form of the Tanka, following the precedent of Saito Moichi, one of Japan's greatest poets of Tanka; some of whose Tanka extended to six lines.