The Only Criticism I Can Comfortably Write

Yes, I prefer Geoffrey Hill's poems over Philip Larkin's:

a Christian, I prefer difficult hope in the midst of easy despair---

permanent hope in the midst of temporary despair.

I prefer this over

temporary blisses or amusements

(strategically deployed to diffuse the fear of death)

in the midst of permanent despair

(with its undiffused, undaunted fear of undisclosed death).

The midst of permanent despair

is a fog on the bright weather of Easter;

a denial of the prerogatives of Christ ("and him crucified");

a disruption of the democracy of the Broad Church,

suborned by the oblong, obligation of uncancelled debt

to the doomed, bedumbed dictatorship of death

and its decomissioned, decomposing grave

deliberately distorted in the reflection of

thrice removed Cousin Samuel's

stately pleasure dome of ancient decree.

 

Starward

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Lest the reader take the penultimate line too literally, I am not familialy related to Samuel Coleridge in any way.  I am thankful to him for being an inspiration to the first writer who inspired me, Mary Wollstonecraft Shelley.

 

This poem is intended to be a kind of improvisation.

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