I'll remember this night
when we hold hands tight
But you have to let go
'Coz we see your bro
I don't really know why
but I tell you what
I think I see a sign
when you smile like that
Never forget this night
when we eat this food
I never ate in my life
yet they taste so good
We run across the street
Even if the light's still red
My heart is fast to beat
There are things left unsaid
This is a magical night
Though the moon is not bright
I want to feel your dress white
And that we fly like kites uphigh
And as we go to the cab
I am starting to go sad
I don't want this to end
I can't seem to comprehend
Nicely written. The
Nicely written. The beginning of a lovely affair dear friend. keep on writing.
Good one
your poems for me, there good to read. You set a story, sad or glory. Just keep going, what ever comes, just write it down, and read it I found. A nice read, let it be, with mind and soul, then you know. Peace my man..
good piece, just remember we
good piece, just remember we all get better with time. ive been writing for over a couple years and it only gets better every experience.
can you hear me now?
Great work!
Peace
Dylan
"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"
Dylan Eliot
Thank you!
Thank you for reading it!
-James Dela Cruz
I absolutely love it! Thank
I absolutely love it! Thank you so much for asking me to read!! I am off to read your others... :)
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Thank you for reading too!
Thank you for reading too! I really appreciate it!
Reread 04-11-15
Good poeting ~slc~
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