Something lit up inside
of him;
He did not know what
But with his arm around the girl
he could smell
the sweet sweat-worn scent
they had made
The breeze of the sea,
had been
blowing her animal scent away
for hours
But now, the winds
were calm
and he could smell her sweet
animal scent
Her musky scent, mixed with perfume
and the sweet salty air
of the sea
Her body
was glowing
under the blanket
It was glowing under the blanket
by the sea,
like a radiator
He loved her sweet
glowing scent,
He loved it,
because he loved her
There was no wind under the blanket
by the sea
Under the blanket by the sea,
they
were very happy
Under the blanket
by the sea,
he lit her cigarette for a kiss
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fucking great poem
Me like very muchies! Interesting take on sex or shall I say love? It's a different perspective I would have never thought of. Good one!
sounds like a good trade to me
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