critical mass


Your fire and mine,

each
half a critical mass

 

But together, enough fissionable

material
to light a city

 

~/~

 

 

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Was I really here over eleven

Was I really here over eleven years ago?  And now, this metaphor is even more . . . shall we say . . . explosive than the first time I read it.


J-Called

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It was an experimental phase,

It was an experimental phase, attempting to create Nature's equivalent of a seed.

J-C4113D's picture

Your use of metaphor in love poems is exceptionally impressive!


J-Called