I heard the copper chimes, ringing
on a morning wind
They woke me, and I wondered
who was calling me
Outside, a big wind was blowing
and a neighbor's rope
was chafing on a flagpole
Beating time, like an aluminum saint
Rap, rap, rapping
under the weather-beaten stars and stripes
And to this, a troop of leaves
were
dancing in the street
A metallic symphony
that was going, round and round
in circles,
to the chafing beat
A strange spectacle,
but I was
mesmerized and watched
Till a dog barked, somewhere over a hill
and suddenly,
the spell was broken
All at once, the leaves that were dancing
fell from the air
And the aluminum saint, made a prayer
to silence, and fell asleep
And everything stopped, including
the chimes
And in the silence – it began to snow.
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This is very very lovely.
This is very very lovely. Thank you for writing and posting such a sound and silence filled poem. I hope you publish it. It is truly a delight to read.
I love the unique use of
I love the unique use of language to create imagery..."aluminum saint" "metallic symphony" "weather-beaten stars-and-stripes". Fantastic!
Tanya Tee
very beautiful. I was directed here by a mutual poet/friend, and i was not disappointed.
I do not have sufficient words to describe the beauty of this poem!
J-Called
This is an excellent poem, it really has pure talent.
Pure imagery brilliantly deployed!
J-Called