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For all those who care

For all those who have stood by me

I thank you

I relieze now that love is not something 2 people shareIts not something one or another gives on V-Day

but love is friendship, hope and joy

You people know who your are

I thank you for helping me

For introducing me to new things

Here is where my words stop.

But my thanks and love will continue forever

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Sorry for not writing in so long. I have had alot going on and some of it is because of  these poems. But i plan to start writing again. Thankyou for letting me see you care. you know who you are and you conviced me to write again.

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©4 August 2003 - 7:32pm — jagedpyro
4 June 2004 - 4:38am — Someone! Yuu used to know.. O.o (not verified)
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Dude,

Although I do adhere to my original opinion of "Gee he's kinda creepy", you have no qualms about letting it known that you're a creative individual. The only thing I can say is though, because it is poetry, and because it is something that comes from the soul, the heart, etc, treat it as so, and as such, write it like every word is gold. Don't write things just because "Well, these two girls hooked up and I'm stuck now", turn it into.. well.. poetry. It's meant to be romantic, and I can see you are somewhat, just.. well.. you're quite rough around the edges. I'm sure though, with time, you'll become quite good.

Remember, love is happiness and pain, all in one. You can't have one without the other, and for every spot of hapiness in love you have, you will have a counter, a losing streak filled with pain.