Words of pain and hate fill the air
Rage building behind a wall of pain
Eyes meet eyes
Those ever taunting eyes
Silence fills the air
The calm before the storm
A crack is heard as fist meets jaw
Screams of pain and retaliation fill the air
More screams of torment
Blood and tears stain the floor
Footsteps running in the distance
Heavy breathing on the floor
A battered soul stands
Walking aimlessly away
Beaten and bloodied
i love it...the only flaw is you repeated your words a lot..but heh..so do i cause i run out of what to say so...i love it..and i love you!!! later
I really like it. You paint a picture that's easy to see. It's good.