Author Information
Clue
Folder:
2007: rebirth process You may never know
For I will simply lie
I'll deny my thoughts of you
'Till the day I die
I will always love you
This is ever true
Through the years our lives move on
And yet you never knew
You are in my memory
My heart will hold you dear
My body craves you like a drug
I always want you near
You might never notice
And I might never tell
But this won't stop my love for you
No matter how loud you yell
You are very dear to me
Even if I'm not to you
So I'll continue with this secretly
And you will never have a clue
I would lose stanza four and condense it down.It seems to weak to matter and think the poem would read better without it. Only an opinion though and still enjoyed your message of secret love. Cheers.
I thought it was only the guys who feel this way.....very nicely done! -Andrew