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2008: the lazy phase The notion that something was up
brought my thoughts to a complete stop.
It was nausea fast-building...
though in my head I was resisting.
Sinking, falling deeper to the ground
I struggle only to find I am bound.
Breathless, my shouts scream whispers...
Lost forever, my spine crept with shivers.
I try to locate where the problem persists
while searching my way through this dark abyss.
Blinded, my hands are left to wander...
Over tasks and sorrows yonder.
Is this a spell to curse my soul?
Yet another obstacle to my goal...
I grasp on tight to lose the anchor
only to wake in such great horror.
It was a dream, a dream is what it was...
Yet in my heart agony it still has.
good and impressive one... yeah its a very clear and good poem with rich thought and sure ... the way you did it is great and heart knocking of course... so I can loudly say that you are a sweet poet with honey poetic feelings and thoughts... hope my poetry has also that much strenth to make way to your heart and brain to capture as this poem of yours has done to mine.... wish you good luck peotry friend... with a hope you will go through my work too..to know if its heart touchig or not?