a tribute to my fallen bro!

in the shadows of a dark night

in the space inside my head

i hear all the thoughts run rampant

and wish that they were dead



the meaniel preemulations

and redundant theories drive me

to think of ways to fix the drama

and make everyone see



but people seem to be

caught up in there own things

no time to help out other folks

and strike with darkened wings



all on the offensive

never on my side

always looking for my weakness

and laughed while i cried



then the darkness comes again

to take my soul away from me

i try hard and fight back

but a tunnel is all i see



but while the black smoke billows

from the hollows of my head

put out the flames, from fire to ash

and know that i am dead





much luv loki

Jacey ryan hoff

Author's Notes/Comments: 

this poem is written from my perspective of this situation. not his. my boy caleb (loki) committed suicide last year and we all took it hard. this was written for him. save a beer for me dude!

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