I've been waiting up
at night
Watching the black shadows on the city
Rising up to meet the deep blue of the late sunset
Palm trees flattened
into these black paper fans
Red brick fading to grey
As the light
Y'know
Dims
We were biking back on
Washington, I think
Past the tarot reader sign
That says "we accept ebt"
And the ringing, buzzing sound of neon
In the liquor store window
And the pavement, cracked
And peppering our worn out grey tires
With little asphalt pebbles.
In the park, where
The shadows kept creeping closer
To the eyeline of the lake
And the birds,
Beginning to roost for the night,
Coupling off and floating on
Lavender ripples
Those were the moments
Where we were together
At the blissful twilight of my old life,
A life that you helped me
put away and out of mind
And for that I'm truly grateful
I truly am
Still, for the long night that followed
I am left bitter
And cynical
Now, the buzz of electric neon signs
Is a reminder that I can't sleep so well anymore
The smell of alcohol
Just reminds me of the time
Right after we were separated
And I was alone
I've been
Staying up late
Trying to keep my head
Trying to keep these voices calm
And happy
And I guess
I've been looking at the shadows of twilight
For so long
But
the black silhouette of the trees in the park
Painted against the fading of all light
No moon, no stars
Just a glowing blue
In the dark sky
Might be
The sign
Of a new dawn
Beautiful imagery, strikingly
Beautiful imagery, strikingly beautiful imagery, presented in a very conversational tone, and the triumphant flourish of the final stanza neatly concludes and justifies the whole poem. This is excellent work, a poignant, yet very sturdy, style; and a superb reading experience. Thank you for posting this.
Starward
Thank you for this
Thank you for this
You're welcome, and I look
You're welcome, and I look forward to reading more of your very moving poetry.
Starward