Dear Sunday

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Dear Sunday,

 

I can't believe it's been seven years

Sometimes I wish I could go back

And find you

And kiss you

And tell you it would all be alright

And that I love you

And I miss you

 

 

I told you I'd always love you

Remember?

I don't think we left too much unsaid

But there's one thing I'm afraid I'll never get to convey

To truly let you know

Because the part of me

That spoke to the part of you

that listened-

Well

It's been a long time.

The thing is-

 

Leaving you is the greatest regret of my life

And if I could do it over, maybe I would

quietly slip out the door this time

Instead of screaming at you

That I knew you never loved me

Because I've never told a lie like that

 

Before or since.

 

Our time together was short,

But it was the best time of my life,

 

All my love,

Josh

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saiom's picture

  I believe that all lost

 

I believe that all lost love will be found

... if not in this life, then in the next life

or in the permanent bliss beyond embodiment

in limiting form



 

 

patriciajj's picture

This remarkable unearthing of

This remarkable unearthing of what remains alive and gnawing at the heart after seven years shows the rare skill of deeply touching the reader with spare, honest and relatable language. Throughout the emotional spellwork there is a searing truth that speaks to us, directly and elegantly: 

 

"And if I could do it over, maybe I would

quietly slip out the door this time

Instead of screaming at you

That I knew you never loved me

Because I've never told a lie like that

Before or since." 

 

How could anyone read that and not have to catch their breath and reach for a tissue? 

 

A very skillful handling of lived experience. 

 

S74RW4RD's picture

You have such a way with

You have such a way with words, and fill them to their fullness with poignant emotion.


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