Winged-ants Haiku

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Winged ants in winter

Falling like brown autumn leaves

With a soft pit-pat

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Not a true haiku, but the ants climbing and falling a lamp-post created a somehow pleasing visceral image to me

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I disagree with your

I disagree with your statement that it is not a true Haiku.  It is a perfect Haiku, in the exact forn and  a single moment of nature imagery.  Some more, please . . .


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