Winged ants in winter
Falling like brown autumn leaves
With a soft pit-pat
Not a true haiku, but the ants climbing and falling a lamp-post created a somehow pleasing visceral image to me
I disagree with your statement that it is not a true Haiku. It is a perfect Haiku, in the exact forn and a single moment of nature imagery. Some more, please . . .
J-9thxciv (J 9th 94)
I disagree with your
I disagree with your statement that it is not a true Haiku. It is a perfect Haiku, in the exact forn and a single moment of nature imagery. Some more, please . . .
J-9thxciv (J 9th 94)