I swim through the tranquil sea
Creating a path of ripples in my wake
At night is when I come up, when I can be free
As the day is threatening, for my secret’s sake
On land, I’m just another random girl
Living about life, in tune with the flow
But underwater is where my beauty will unfurl
Maybe you can see too? All you must do is follow
But be careful, dear human, for I’m not all I seem
You might get carried away with this rare underwater beauty
Don’t dwell here too long, no matter how much you are keen
Oh, please stop, crunching your way across the floor to me
For are you so blind you can’t see the white remains
Of your fellow mortals, on whom you stand upon
All of whom fell for my merciless games
Ah, there it is, your look of fear
As what I say hits you in the face
As I become a monster wearing a sneer
As you try to get away in haste
But, alas, you fail, and I grip you tight
You scream, but no one can hear, anyways, you’re too late
Your face, so beautiful with terror, enveloped in the night
And you slowly sink to rest with the others who shared your watery fate
An alluring poem with a
An alluring poem with a deadly dark end. Enjoyed this read very much, although fantasy, well written and I liked the mermaid's gile.
http://www.postpoems.org/authours/a.griffiths57
There are some who could not
There are some who could not survive without fantasy. That is what I got from this write. Well, it's also put together nicely. Happy mermaiding!~peace~
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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
thank you! yes, that's quite
thank you! yes, that's quite true. i think maybe i might be one of them.....
my mermaiding is always happy....maybe sometime you could join me? lol
If I ever feel the need to
If I ever feel the need to run away I will join you!! I maybe just like reality too much...I always did. It's hard to be something I know I'm not. ('if only i didn't like life so much...' (?) *confused look*)---no, really, we all have our own ways of coping with things. I can accept others' ways and love them just the way they are---even if they are different. o_O
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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
Experience of the ocean/sea
Sorry for the long comment !! Please ignore if you don't agree.Above all, plz dn't waste valuable time reading this trash
Experience of the ocean/sea ?
The unfathomable depths
Blue , calm , beneath
Tranquility beneath the rough waves
The froth of the frail,toiling human
Calm,deep soul lying sleeping
I wonderwho how deep ur thots are
You have laid most people's wisdom bare !!
Wonderful deep writing IWH
too deep for me to fathom .
The mystery of the ocean depths
.... Lost continents... etc etc.
©bishu
thanks!
i like long comments, though! and i'm sure it's worth something reading it, if you wrote it!
i think like 95% of the ocean is still unexplored. or something like that. rough waves at the top, but who knows what lies beneath? (i hope there are other mermaids around...)
:) thank you for your wonderful comment
This is kind of crepy, but it
This is kind of crepy, but it is good!
lol, thanks :)
lol, thanks :)