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You're Beautiful
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You're beautiful, please don't ever forget that
If you perservere, in the end you'll win
The other girls made fun of you for being "fat"?
Forget them, not everyone can be sickly thin
Don't let them bother you, don't let them make you cry
They aren't worth a bit of your precious time
What they say about you is far from true, they lie
Lies so vicious they should be a crime
Their words are hurtful, I know, I've been there too
In time you'll learn how to let their words slide off
But until then, your body shouldn't have to pay for what they do
Your braveness against those girls will pay off
They'll see how strong you are, then they'll stop
They wont be able to break through your walls
And by that time, you'll be on the top
At least above them, deaf to their calls
Don't pick your self apart because of what they say
Just let yourself grow, your chest isn't forever flat
Do forget their words, just bat them away
You're beautiful, please don't ever forget that
That's a really encouraging
That's a really encouraging poem, and then the ending is nice because it takes the focus and brings it back to the reader in a very loving comment.
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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
thanks <3 didn't even notice
thanks <3
didn't even notice what the ending did there! thanks for pointing that out :)
Bullying:
Wonderful and encouraging advice for those who are being bullied. How thoughtful, instead of just wallowing in the unecessary misery such attacks bring. Your poem here is powerfully positive, I thought a good read and well written.
http://www.postpoems.org/authours/a.griffiths57
:) thank you, i try
:) thank you, i try