I am a special girl.
I did not want to play this game.
I will not tell you my name.
Not because I'm scared.
Not because I'm wary
Not because I'm afraid you'll put my dead body in the qaurry.
They beat you too it.
No one knows I'm dead.
No one will find my head.
They told me to run, so I did.
I ran into the forest and I hid.
They still found me.
Still killed me.
They did it slowly, without mercy.
They cut off my fingers
They stabbed my chest
They left me a bloody mess.
This was not enough for them.
They had to slit my throat.
Had to off my head.
To make sure I was dead.
These are the words I would say, if I could talk.
If I were alive, not dead.
If they had left me alone, safe, in my bed.
Words of a murdered child:
Your first poem certainly drew my attention; what an awfull story and for it to be true even more ghastly. Your words are strong and leave little to the imagination, what an extremely good poem.
http://www.postpoems.org/authours/a.griffiths57
words of a murdered child.
thank you. have you read my other poems?
A picture may say a thousand words, But a story tells of somthing greater than any pencil could imagine.
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i agree with the other comment.. this is a very nice piece and i hope to read more of what you write.. keep up the good work
P.S. im sorry to hear that this was a true story...
It's hard to believe that
It's hard to believe that this is your first poem ! awesomely written for a first poem.. and I felt so sorry for her when i read your note that this is based on a true story..!